Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Corellian sap-wine

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  • 1 Corellian sap-wine
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Imp
        • 1.1.2.2 Fan
        • 1.1.2.3 Ayrehead
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Corellian sap-wine

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 14:02, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 14:43, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
  2. Fan26 (Talk) 15:57, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:59, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 08:14, May 28, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:27, May 29, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • Could you rephrase the wording in the date reference so that Aftermath and Life Debt aren't referred to as in-universe events (as opposed to OOU media depicting IU events)? Imperators II(Talk) 14:16, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
    • I'm fairly sure I altered what you'd meant, but if not let me know.—spookywillowwtalk 14:25, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
  • Any mention in this? Imperators II(Talk) 14:17, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
    • Added.—spookywillowwtalk 14:25, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
Fan
  • The positioning of the BtS and the appearances should be switched. Fan26 (Talk) 14:43, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
    • Swapped.—spookywillowwtalk 15:29, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You should use the LifeDebtdate template in the date reference for this, which actually explains how the book takes place in 5 ABY. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:48, May 26, 2019 (UTC)
    • Added.—spookywillowwtalk 16:06, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
      • Actually looking at it again you should probably just say "several months after the Battle of Endor, which occurred in 4 ABY, former... etc." since the several weeks previous thing means you can't tell if it's 4 ABY or 5 ABY. You can just date the Battle of Endor taking place in 4 ABY to the Galactic Atlas as it directly dates it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:45, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
        • Added. I'm not entirely sure the template is needed since it occurs within that gap between the novels, technically, but kept it for now.—spookywillowwtalk 21:15, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
          • Ah no, definitely not. The book itself says it's been several months since Endor doesn't it? I don't think a separate reference for that sentence is needed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:28, May 27, 2019 (UTC)
            • Removed.—spookywillowwtalk 21:41, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

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