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Condiment oil

Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:24, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 21:58, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 123 words (0 introduction, 83 body, 40 behind the scenes)
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Support

VergenceScatter (talk) 23:39, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:41, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 11:14, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 20:15, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 21:57, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

We can implement some sort of date for this story, Axel is 17 in it, and roughly 30 in Convergence Lewisr (talk) 23:51, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:39, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
~~Also I think we can include the era~~ Lewisr (talk) 23:52, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:39, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
~~The page should include its present day mention/thought by Axel~~ Lewisr (talk) 19:52, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
- Iirc it is not thought of by Axel, only mentioned in passing by the narrator. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:54, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
  - I discussed it with another EC before leaving this one, and we both agreed it was more Axel Lewisr (talk) 20:02, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
    - I've re-read the excerpt myself, and while I did appear to have missed the bit about consuming condiment oil, I still disagree that it's mentioned from Axel's perspective. I've added the former. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 02:19, 8 September 2023 (UTC)
      - I spoke with another EC about this, and they also agreed that it was from Axel's thoughts. Also when compared with other parts from Axel's POV it becomes clear that it is Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
        I still disagree. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:13, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
        I've added some info that might work, please let me know if that works for you. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:02, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
        That works thanks! Can you add a year at the start of the sentence with the stuff with Axel please? Something like 'That year' will be fine Lewisr (talk) 15:47, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
        Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:34, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Anil

~~Could you please list The High Republic: Tales of Light and Life audiobook if the short story is in it and it's unabridged? Same for Petrish Imglor.~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 12:10, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:39, 12 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:57, 15 September 2023 (UTC)