Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Commander of Organic Training

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Commander of Organic Training

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (talk) 02:08, October 22, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Follow-up to Horn Ambigene

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:04, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
2. LordMominutiae (talk) 15:08, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 16:05, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 16:32, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
5. Great work. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:23, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• The body is one run-on sentence. Please split. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:32, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Erebus Chronus (talk) 20:42, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Fan

• That first sentence is still one big run-on. I'd like to see it split up a little further. Fan26 (Talk) 16:12, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Better? Erebus Chronus (talk) 18:39, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
    • Well, now the second sentence is a runon.
      • Is that alright? Erebus Chronus (talk) 00:42, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
• "...after he stationed him..." Regardless of where this bit ends up in the article, it needs to be fixed so that only one character is being referred to with a pronoun. Fan26 (Talk) 00:33, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Erebus Chronus (talk) 00:42, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:13, 30 October 2020 (UTC)