Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Color-crawler

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Color-crawler

• Nominated by: - Princess GLG 12:34, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First CAN, not sure how good it is.

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Not bad at all.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:30, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
2. Novels ftw Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:42, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:24, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
4. Stake black ^msg 20:25, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
5. Cade Calrayn 03:40, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
6. Nice job. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:40, March 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Stake

• Great work for a first nom. Couple of things:
• "Package" is repeated three times in there. Try a synonym.
  • Better?
• The colored slime can be added to the "distinctions" field of the infobox.
  • Added.
• Link to the kidnapping of the Solo children. Also, please specify the names of the children kidnapped.
  • Done.
• Beef up that BtS! More context on The Crystal Star. Is it a book? Who wrote it? The writer is important because he is the one who created the color-crawler.
  • Better?
• If he is non-sentient as the infobox says, this information should also be on the body.
  • I guess the sources do not really say they are non-sentient only that they are creatures. So, I removed that from the infobox.
• Context on Leia Organa Solo, Stake black ^msg 13:47, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
  • I think I fixed most of that. - Princess GLG 14:23, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

1. Exiled Jedi
   • You should add Category:Species of undefined sentience to the article's categories.
     • Done.
   • Please use CSWECite for the Encyclopedia reference, it contains the volume number, page number, and entry name.
     • Like that?
       • Looks good.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:24, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
   • Is there any indication how large the creatures were?
     • Uh...small. Other then that it doesn't really say.
       • Just checking.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:24, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
   • Nice to see you on the CAN page.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:12, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
     • Thanks. - Princess GLG 16:54, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

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