Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Clone shadow trooper

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Clone shadow trooper

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 10:02, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:34, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 04:04, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 16:06, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Dent

• There shouldn't be single-sentence paragraphs. Your final sentence in the BTS section is one. Dentface (talk) 02:55, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I hadn't noticed it, fixed, thanks! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:02, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Shaynomer

• In addition to the full release date of Force Collection not being required, you need to include the fact that the game predates the canon reset (Example).
  • Done, thanks. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:42, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
• Per Notability policy, that FFG card can be taken as the 1st canon depiction of the subject; the armor of the trooper matches the Legends depiction. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:10, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I didn't really understand what you mean, the FFG card depicts the Shadow Trooper, the Imperial Stormtrooper division. Could you please explain what change you'd like to see? Thanks a lot! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:42, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
    • The card clearly depicts the clone shadow trooper from Legends, does it not? Both the design and the helmet match. With that information, this card counts as the first visual depiction in canon, since Swayed by the Dark Side is considered canon per policy. The Notability policy I linked above allows you to add it as a source to this article. Thus, an update is needed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:27, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
      • The point is that the card depicts the Shadow Trooper, the Stormtrooper, while the clone shadow trooper is only mentioned by the card. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:33, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
        • Ah, you seemed to have confused the two cards. I'm referring to this card, not Force Collection. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:35, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
          • Uh, sorry. Added the image and updated the body. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:18, 13 September 2021 (UTC)

Vitus

• I think it would be suitable to add the cloaked individual had a red lightsaber. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:24, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Shayanomer considered it not-relevant, hence, I'm not sure what to do… LucaRoR ^(Talk) 04:56, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Hmm, alright thanks --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:02, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• I don't see a need to deduce those BBY/ABY dates for the Empire; stating the fact that they served the Empire is enough.
• Missing mention of the blaster. I don't know much about blaster models, but it should be mentioned if it's discernible. OOM 224 14:38, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done, thanks for the name of the blaster :P LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:45, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:47, 18 September 2021 (UTC)