Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Clay warriors of Zardossa Stix

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Clay warriors of Zardossa Stix

  • Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 04:03, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: These have to be a reference to the Terracotta Army.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:THR

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Support

  1. Clean. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:38, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 06:49, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Looks good. Just gave it a small edit to avoid the not-so-formal word "things" and implemented the Oxford comma. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:01, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
  4. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:59, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Copy-edited to remove dangling participle. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:43, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • BTS requires the full name of the subject.
  • Can we be certain that these aren't the same statues that appeared in The Disappeared, Part II? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:23, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed your first point. As for the second, the stone guardians are clearly a different subject, since they're droids of mysterious origin, not clay statues. SilverSunbird (talk) 04:28, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Didn't even know that page existed. :P
Luca
  • Right now, it looks like the TCW episode supports the fact that the statues were from the moon, which I don't think is accurate. If the TCW episode is only used to reference the context for the moon, you should reference the name of the moon to the book, while the context to the episode.
    • Done.
  • Is this fallen army notable enough for an article?
    • I don't think so. Everything about the army is tied up with the statues, and we know pretty much nothing whatsoever about it.
      • Fair enough. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 06:49, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
  • What the legend consisted of should most likely be documented in the body. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 06:39, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Fortunately, it already is. SilverSunbird (talk) 06:42, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Ah, I totally missed that, sorry. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 06:49, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:45, 26 November 2021 (UTC)