Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Chokeroot

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Chokeroot

Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:52, June 28, 2019 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 11:12, June 28, 2019 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, June 28, 2019 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:39, June 29, 2019 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 11:28, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can Journey to Star Wars: The Force Awakens be reffed to aftermath? My copy of the book has the program's name on the cover, but unless I've missed something it doesn't directly specify it as a publishing program that the book is part of. Fan26 (Talk) 18:33, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Hmm, hadn't noticed that, so added.—spookywilloww^talk 21:07, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

~~Saleucami needs context.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:03, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
~~You don't specify that the Taffral home is actually on Saleucami.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:03, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
~~I'd actually argue that mashed chokeroot should have its own article as well since chokeroot is an ingredient and that's a distinct dish.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:03, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Addressed all three; shuffled some things to reflect the addition of the mashed chokeroot article, if you'd take a look?—spookywilloww^talk
To clear up the disagreement that's going on, I don't think that mentioning the publishing program is necessary at all. Other articles like Blevins don't as it isn't really relevant to the individual subject. It might be if the chokeroot had then appeared in TFA, but it doesn't. Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:49, June 28, 2019 (UTC)
- Imp cut it, which works for me. I was never super sure myself.—spookywilloww^talk 18:17, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

~~Could its status as a root/plant be added to the infobox?~~ Zed42 (talk) 21:12, June 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Amended.—spookywilloww^talk 21:45, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

~~Since this is a Canon article with no Legends counterpart, it's not necessary to state that first appearance is a "canon reference book." That's a given. Just remove "canon" from there.~~
- Removed.—spookywilloww^talk 16:56, June 27, 2019 (UTC)
~~I don't think you need an additional reference for that Journey to "Star Wars: The Force Awakens" thing in BTS as the novel's cover features the publishing program's logo.~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:50, June 27, 2019 (UTC)
- Well, per the logic in Fan's objection, I added that reference because the logo doesn't specify it's a publishing program.—spookywilloww^talk 16:56, June 27, 2019 (UTC)
  - Well then, I'm leaving up to you, but I think if the book has the program's name and logo on it, it doesn't really need an additional reference note. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:15, June 27, 2019 (UTC)
    - I'd like to clarify that I wasn't saying that I think it is necessary. I was wondering myself, and if it's not necessary that makes sense. Fan26 (Talk) 00:10, June 28, 2019 (UTC)
      - Guys, the info in that clause is completely irrelevant to the article's subject, so I've taken the liberty of just cutting it. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:08, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

Was mashed chokeroot served on several occasions months after Endor, or was it just one dinner? If it's the latter, that should be specified, as otherwise it kinda makes the following sentence confusing. Also, if it was just one dinner, you should specify that the altercation occurred during that dinner.
- Think I've got that now.—spookywilloww^talk 13:47, June 30, 2019 (UTC)
How exactly did Webb "betray" Dav? I feel like that should be specified, because otherwise it kinda reads strange that the generic act of "betrayal" was followed by the specific action of stunning someone with a blaster. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:32, June 30, 2019 (UTC)
- Added that was betrayal by revealing his location, hopefully that's specific enough —spookywilloww^talk 13:47, June 30, 2019 (UTC)
  - Did Webb alert the Imperials during the dinner? Because that's what the current wording implies. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:16, July 2, 2019 (UTC)
    - It was before^^ Does that work? —spookywilloww^talk 11:15, July 2, 2019 (UTC)