Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Chiss Ascendancy's northeast-zenith sector

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Chiss Ascendancy's northeast-zenith sector

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~~— Samonic 10:17, 14 April 2022 (UTC)~~

~~If the image does indeed represent the sector, you'll need to add all of those astronomical objects in the article and the infobox.~~ --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:10, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
- The image contains the Ornfra system which is part of the sector. It is unknown whether or not the other planets are part of the sector. --ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 22:15, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
  - If I may interject here, current status article precedent is not to use images like this for sector articles (only images that explicitly denote what's pictured is the relevant sector are used). Imperators II^(Talk) 08:05, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
    - In that case, the image should be removed. Thanks Imperators! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:09, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
    - It is removed now. --ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 16:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

~~Is the separate cite for 2021 being the novel's release year necessary? Most canon novels I've seen are self-sourcing in that regard, due to the copyright pages or dustjacket flaps.~~—spookywilloww^talk 19:25, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- The citation was removedThrawnChiss7 (talk) 10:15, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
~~Seems like there's an inconsistency in the article for the capitalization of "Ascendancy". I'm assuming that it's always supposed to be capitalized when mentioned in full, if you could take a look.~~
- Yes it is always capitalized, and it is capitalized now.ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 22:50, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
Under the infobox pipelink for |b1=, simply noting the skirmish as "Ornfra" doesn't give much context, kinda makes it seem like the planet itself is a skirmish title. Perhaps that could be changed to something else.—spookywilloww^talk 10:59, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- For sectors, you only list the location of the battle, not the battles name.ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 22:50, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

I'd like to see just a bit of context for what the Nine Ruling Families and the Great Families were.
Do we know who actually owned the asteroid missile platform?
The "temporarily" in the infobox should be changed to the more specific "c. 18 BBY" if applicable. In either case, the article should note that the platform was only temporarily situated there. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:27, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
- All addressed (The spy platform was the Grysks, and that it noted in the article)ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 16:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Unknown Regions and Chiss space is currently infobox exclusive Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:30, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
Context for Mith Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:30, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
Given the multiple factions, can you expand on what the victory meant? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:30, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
You're at 162 words, so given the objections above you should probably look at sectioning it Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:30, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
- All addressed, sectioned the article.ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 16:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Article is over 250 words. (349 words without BTS).— Samonic 12:56, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
- What should I do now?ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 16:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
  - You can join Wookieepedia's Discord and type "@JocastaBot withdraw CAN: Chiss Ascendancy's northeast-zenith sector" or ask an EcuCorps member to withdraw your nomination.— Samonic 19:17, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Are there no quotes available? — Samonic 10:22, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- This is the only part that mentions the sector (it is a narration) "Ornfra was an important economic and political hub of the Ascendancy's northeast-zenith sector."
  - Apparently so.— Samonic 10:17, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
Though I've nabbed it this time do be mindful of double-refs being left behind when removing a ref from a section. —Unsigned comment by Spookywilloww (talk • contribs)