Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Chenodra

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Chenodra

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 22:37, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:20, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 23:21, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:44, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
4. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:03, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
5. Zed42 (talk) 20:23, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
6. —spookywilloww^talk 01:53, May 23, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• Please pipelink to Sexes Fan26 (Talk) 23:00, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:17, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• This part should be rewritten in a more formal tone. ...she and another soldier had messed up very badly.. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:48, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • How does this look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 14:20, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• Category needs to be updated from Terrestrial astronomical objects.
• I think you could use the city infobox template, since it's implied to be some sort of settlement with numerous buildings.
• "who was convinced she and another soldier had made a big mistake during their time on Bamayar." Since Ajax was present at Chenodra, he should be mentioned directly rather than as 'another soldier'. Zed42 (talk) 22:27, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 22:51, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Since there are multiple locations on Bamayar, you should implement Category:Bamayar locations. Zed42 (talk) 23:00, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:54, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Having looked up the context surrounding Chenodra in a preview of the book, I'm unsure if it's meant to be a world. This dialogue precedes the quote on this page:

  "Came up to me on Bamayar. After we took that stinking port—"
  "Chenodra."
  "Chenodra. Came up to me during the cleanup…"

To me, it seems like Chenodra is meant to be the name of the "stinking port" rather than an entirely different world. What are your thoughts on this? Zed42 (talk) 23:26, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

• • Port is also an alcohol, that looks to me like some kind of very vulgar drink. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:41, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
    • I don't think it means alcohol in this context. I was thinking more like a spaceport or a port town which the Sixty-First captured while deployed on Bamayar. Zed42 (talk) 07:45, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
      • Ah I see what you mean now. When I saw "stinking port" the first time the first thing I thought was an alcohol. I think that it could mean either to be fair, I always thought Chenodra was be corrected over Bamayar in the conversation. How does it look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 09:26, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:53, May 23, 2020 (UTC)