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Cavaellin Spice Creams
- Nominated by: Immi Thrax
(talk) 13:31, 23 August 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
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Support
- VergenceScatter (talk) 03:07, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
- Neat! Interesting that they were in Legends but canonized. Also, nice work at 249 words :p -- YakovChaimTzvi
(talk) 21:20, 27 August 2021 (UTC) - Dentface (talk) 01:35, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:28, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:12, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Object
Dent
The databank source you have for Takodana calls the location a world, not a planet. You'll need a separate source that calls it a planet.Dentface (talk) 15:45, 23 August 2021 (UTC)- Forgot to respond: corrected! Immi Thrax (talk) 07:33, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
- Forgot to respond: corrected! Immi Thrax
Macaroni-spiced creams
I'm not seeing anything on their spicy zing.- Changed "snap" to "spicy zing". Immi Thrax (talk) 05:07, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
- Changed "snap" to "spicy zing". Immi Thrax
I don't think that the Cavaell system should be listed in the infobox as homeworld, since it's not a planet.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:19, 27 August 2021 (UTC)- Removed, though makes me wonder if we should tweak the wording on that like we did for animal-based ingredients (to account for products like dairy stuff). Like, "Place of origin"? Immi Thrax (talk) 05:07, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
- Striking for now but you're right—we could, in theory, switch the paramter to something like "Origin point." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:53, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Removed, though makes me wonder if we should tweak the wording on that like we did for animal-based ingredients (to account for products like dairy stuff). Like, "Place of origin"? Immi Thrax
Please mention that they first appeared in SWG.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:35, 29 August 2021 (UTC)- Done, but it may be incorrect. Immi Thrax (talk) 22:53, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Done, but it may be incorrect. Immi Thrax
UberSoldat
The order of events in the second paragraph is rather confusing to follow, please restructure.UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Restructured, have a look and let me know if it needs further. I dropped the detail about the homicidal droids (it was mentioned in the cookbook but probably off topic from the food?) Immi Thrax (talk) 22:33, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Restructured, have a look and let me know if it needs further. I dropped the detail about the homicidal droids (it was mentioned in the cookbook but probably off topic from the food?) Immi Thrax
Comments
All the cookbook has to say about the Cavaell system is the name and that the cookies are from there. Immi Thrax (talk) 13:31, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:32, 30 August 2021 (UTC)