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Carrivar
- Nominated by: LucaRoR
(Talk) 17:05, 10 January 2022 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
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Imperators II(Talk) 21:48, 28 January 2022 (UTC)- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:53, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:28, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
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I'm seeing more info on Carrivar from Refugee that should be added. There's a quote, and correspondingly some context on the planet's mention. And even further, I'm not seeing where in the novel is Carrivar even identified as a planet.Imperators II(Talk) 10:44, 26 January 2022 (UTC)- All should be done. Thank you! LucaRoR (Talk) 10:58, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
- Please go in-depth with the details. In the novel, Sebatyne is described as showing Wyn a map with Carrivar on it - please note the exact how, where, and whys of this. Also, the former claims to have a specific mission in the Unknown Regions with respect to Carrivar, but we also know she and the other Jedi with her are searching for Zonama Sekot. Is what Sebatyne saying the truth or just a smokescreen? Imperators II(Talk) 11:09, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
- Done, all the rest of the information is relevant to the Hemes Arbora, but not really to Carrivar. LucaRoR (Talk) 11:32, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
- Done, all the rest of the information is relevant to the Hemes Arbora, but not really to Carrivar. LucaRoR
- Please go in-depth with the details. In the novel, Sebatyne is described as showing Wyn a map with Carrivar on it - please note the exact how, where, and whys of this. Also, the former claims to have a specific mission in the Unknown Regions with respect to Carrivar, but we also know she and the other Jedi with her are searching for Zonama Sekot. Is what Sebatyne saying the truth or just a smokescreen? Imperators II(Talk) 11:09, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
- All should be done. Thank you! LucaRoR
I believe you should also note that the Hemes Arbora traveled to Umaren'k first.Please specify that Osseriton was a planet in a different star system instead of just another planet in the Carrivar system.Imperators II(Talk) 12:46, 26 January 2022 (UTC)- Both done, word count is at 164. LucaRoR (Talk) 13:00, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
- For the record, I tweaked the article to only state the system of Umaren'k since the system of Osseriton is not that relevant to Carrivar. Imperators II(Talk) 21:48, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
- Both done, word count is at 164. LucaRoR
Comments
- The Unknown Regions supports the date. LucaRoR (Talk) 17:11, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:28, 15 February 2022 (UTC)