Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Carok Hittak

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Carok Hittak

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 23:34, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 00:10, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 157 words (0 introduction, 114 body, 43 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 119 words (0 introduction, 75 body, 44 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. ECvote Awesome OOM 224 (he/him) 23:21, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:09, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 00:09, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Review note: Welcome to the CAN, nice to see new faces! Lewisr (talk) 03:17, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
  • You'll need to find a way to include that Hittak was part of the Jedi Order in the body. Lewisr (talk) 03:17, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Silandra Sho could use some context (e.g. that she's a Jedi Master) Lewisr (talk) 03:17, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
  • It would be worth including a note that in the stories present day (along with a date) Rooper recalled Silandra telling her the stories of the shield's preivous owners including Hittak (and some context for why it came up) Lewisr (talk) 03:17, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
  • You don't need to include the "first" in the BTS since this is currently Carok's only source Lewisr (talk) 03:17, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Also related to the present day events objection is that it should be noted that he was considered legendary according to Rooper Lewisr (talk) 04:16, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Missing a relevant species category, in this case Category:Individuals of unspecified species Lewisr (talk) 04:16, 31 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

I assumed that mentioning he was a Jedi also meant he was part of the Jedi Order. The story didn't specifically mention him being part of the order, just that he was a Jedi, so should I remove that from the infobox? I made the other changes and also added his death. CometSmudge (talk) 15:54, 31 March 2024 (UTC)

  • To note if this was in response to me, you can respond underneath my objections in that section instead of here! Since there are times that Jedi exist but not the Order we should note it down, it can be as easy as 'Carok Hittak was a Jedi of the Jedi Order.' Regarding the death, does the story mention this cause I wasn't seeing it. Even if someone is likely to have died before, we only list it when they are stated to have died, so in this case it'd be better to remove the death Lewisr (talk) 19:42, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Thanks. The story mentions his "dying breath", so he's definitely dead by the time it takes place. CometSmudge (talk) 22:14, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
      • Ah woops you're right! Thanks for that Lewisr (talk) 04:42, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:09, 7 April 2024 (UTC)