Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Carid Tamb

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Carid Tamb

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 23:28, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
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UberSoldat

• I would just replace New Republic Era with the mention of the conflict with the Resistance.
• Can you also specify that the Steadfast was destroyed and the First Order was defeated at the end?
• Per precedent, you don't need to source the date separately for the simultaneous release, only the year. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:27, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
  • All addressed. I seem to remember intending to mention the outcome of the battle, but it must have slipped my mind. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 16:45, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Article body is now at 170 words, meaning it requires an introduction. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:30, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
      • I've sectioned it. (I've never had a sectioned CA before so hopefully that's alright). JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 02:43, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
        • The whole article is now at 250 words. I still think you can expand the intro beyond two sentences, so that number is only going to increase. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:01, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

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