- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Caramm V
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:18, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Clone Wars
(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
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- Good job again, Clone Commander Lee--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:31, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry, but I thought that SavageBob had said that beautiful wasn't POV.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:59, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
~Savage
20:53, June 10, 2011 (UTC)- Menkooroo 07:03, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
Object
- Imperators II
Please note that TEAOC lists star systems, not planets. Also it has established sectors for Mid Rim systems. So please update the article accordingly, i.e., mention the planet's sector, system and coordinates in prose and add correct information about TEAOC to the BTS section.- Ah thank you. All should be allright now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
"mention the planet's sector, system and coordinates in prose and add correct information about TEAOC to the BTS section".Imperators II(Talk) 20:36, June 6, 2011 (UTC)- Should be allright now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:43, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
- Ah thank you. All should be allright now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
In the Ado Eemon article, you mention that the planet supplied the CIS with HMPs. Add this info.- Added. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
If you've added Category:Republic-aligned planets to the article, this information has to be reflected in the main body and the infobox.Imperators II(Talk) 20:11, June 5, 2011 (UTC)- That wasn't me, but this info is wrong. Removed. Thanks for your review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
"Beautiful" seems to be a point-of-view to me.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:18, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
- Please take a look at the discussion about that at the Eemon-nom. The word is exactly mentioned in the source. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:23, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
- All right then, I guess its okay if its in the source.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:31, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
- Bob
I'm going to have to agree that "beautiful" is POV, even if the OS uses that word. You can hedge this by saying that "it was considered beautiful" or something, but Wookieepedia can't call it that from the authorial voice. ~Savage 22:34, June 9, 2011 (UTC)- Killed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:27, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
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