Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Cannom collar/Legends

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.==Cannom collar/Legends==
  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:58, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A whoooooooooole lotta appearances and sources for a whoooooooooole lotta nothin'
  • Date Archived: 20:57, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 310 words (0 introduction, 190 body, 120 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 184 words (0 introduction, 64 body, 120 behind the scenes)
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  1. CometSmudge (talk) 21:55, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

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Comet
  • Why are the words "as did" cited to something? There's not really information there
    • We know that there were four total Quermians in the Jedi Order when Yarael was around. In the Zam Wesell comic, the three aside from Poof appear, and we see them wearing cannom collars—but they are not identified. The three other Quermian Jedi are identified in the New Essential Guide to Alien Species, but they are not pictured. Ergo, we can't cite their wearing the collars and IDs to the same source, but through process of elimination we can at least determine they are the same Quermians. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 01:45, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
      • This has been cleaned up, disregard initial explanation. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 02:26, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
  • You should describe what the collar physically looks like in the article.
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 01:45, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
  • A few more of the infobox fields could probably be filled out, like type and color.
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 01:45, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
  • I think you should add specific instances of the characters wearing the collar instead of just saying that they wore it.
    • Poof is never seen without the collar in any in-universe media and Lundi is only pictured with it in OOU media (and he is never pictured whatsoever in IU media). The only individuals I can cite specific instances for are the three Jedi Knight Quermians and Delko, purely by virtue of the three Knights only appearing once total and Delko's second appearance being too un-detailed to say for sure he's wearing the collar. Is this fine? - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 01:45, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
      • I think you might need to briefly mention all of Poof's appearances when he's depicted wearing it, but that does seem kind of excessive, so hopefully someone more experienced could clarify that.CometSmudge (talk) 03:58, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
      • Per your reasoning on discord, I guess for now just add the specific instances for the reasonable characters, and if someone disagrees than they can just object themselves CometSmudge (talk)
        • Added; I think I've also made an acceptable way of providing a timeframe for Poof and Lundi. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:10, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
  • The trailer should be 1st mention, not the 1st picture CometSmudge (talk) 00:57, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 01:45, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Dani
  • Trailers depicting the subject without identifying them is a 1stp, not a 1stm as Comet said. I haven't watched the trailer but I'm willing to bet it's not IDed in it. Some examples: Voxx Cluster and Tam Posla NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 10:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:21, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
  • BTs needs to be re-arranged. We do 1st appearance first and then detail the first preview/mention/ID in chronological order after the appearance. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 18:07, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
  • You need to move the trailer source from where it is to "for the". "1999 film TPM, first of prequel" isn't sourceable to it. I recommend Year by Year. Also, since 1999 is discussed elsewhere, we need a full date for the movie. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 18:07, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • Is the appearance in Republic 53 notable in anyway to note in the body? Lewisr (talk) 23:07, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
    • No, simply a background Quermian. I assume we don't denote every instance of a background character wearing something, but if that's not the case I can certainly add it. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 03:01, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
      • If it's an entirely new character then I'd say it does need to note yeah, though not to the same extent as others Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
        • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

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