- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
CT-720
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 17:58, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
QuiGonJinn 
(Talk) 09:14, February 13, 2020 (UTC)-
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:32, February 13, 2020 (UTC) - Zed42 (talk) 01:25, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 01:26, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
You can reword the date info and just say "sometime prior to the hunt for Vader" instead of the unnecessarily long date reference.UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:05, February 11, 2020 (UTC)- Done for all three nominations. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:39, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
It was Valance who worked with CT-720 and the other hunters, not Cavic. This needs to be corrected in the article.UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:09, February 11, 2020 (UTC)- I thought Cavic said the line. I double checked this when I touched up on the articles. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:39, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Cavic did say the line—but regarding Valance. "Look, I know you've worked with some tough bounty hunters…" Zed42 (talk) 22:52, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Ah gotcha. Changed for all three articles. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 23:08, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Cavic did say the line—but regarding Valance. "Look, I know you've worked with some tough bounty hunters…" Zed42 (talk) 22:52, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
- I thought Cavic said the line. I double checked this when I touched up on the articles. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:39, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
Date ref needs a little more work. It should be specific to the comic, as "both events" seems very vague. The same applies to BT-823 and Kolivo.UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:04, February 12, 2020 (UTC)- Done for all three noms. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:55, February 12, 2020 (UTC)
QGJ
The two templates in the appearances section currently contradict each other. One says that the character was only mentioned; the other states that he physically appeared in the comic. We generally don't distinguish between mentions in the main narrative and in flashbacks. A mention is a mention, so the {{Flash}} template is not needed here. Same goes for the other noms below, obviously.QuiGonJinn(Talk) 08:38, February 12, 2020 (UTC)
- Sorted for all three noms. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:46, February 12, 2020 (UTC)
Fan
If CT-720 was only mentioned, it's not necessary to list the illustrators in the BtS.Fan26 (Talk) 14:37, February 12, 2020 (UTC)- Sorted for all three noms. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:46, February 12, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
I think the date note needs some work. For example, does the mention of CT-720 occur in the flashback scene? Or how exactly the short story "Two Sides to Every Sortie" helps us dating the events of Target Vader 6? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:56, February 13, 2020 (UTC)
- Changed the date note for all three articles. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:21, February 13, 2020 (UTC)
- I have made a few changes to the note to keep it shorter. Since the mention occurs in a flashback scene, I believe the mention taking place before the hunt for Vader can be sourced to the comic book itself. The new note just explains the date of the hunt. Please take a look and see if that works. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:32, February 13, 2020 (UTC)
- I have made a few changes to the note to keep it shorter. Since the mention occurs in a flashback scene, I believe the mention taking place before the hunt for Vader can be sourced to the comic book itself. The new note just explains the date of the hunt. Please take a look and see if that works.
- Changed the date note for all three articles. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:21, February 13, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:26, February 14, 2020 (UTC)