Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bursa–Gungan war

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Bursa–Gungan war

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Support

  1. Meesa like this artcile. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 06:34, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:33, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote OOM 224 16:55, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. Yousa had a challenge with dis one. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 11:55, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 15:05, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca-RoR war
  • Just a reminder to change the date of the War of the Gungan tribes as discussed on Discord.
    • Already done
      • Oh, hadn't noticed that. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 06:34, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The sourcing of the quote in the BTS does not work.
    • Fixed
  • Since it is mentioned by two medias, is there no relevant quote? LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 06:06, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
    • No, it's only referred to in the databank, which can't be assumed to be in universe. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:28, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
Fan
  • The link to The NEG to Alien Species in the BtS currently links to Mammon Hoole's IU book. Fan26 (Talk) 15:00, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • I believe The Essential Guide to Episode I can be listed under Sources with "Cancelled" next to it if the cut information did not make its way into other sources.
  • BTS should note which source the article follows in regards to the contradictory info. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 17:34, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
Immi Thrax
  • "It was believed" by whom? Although CSWE uses that exact phrasing, it invites the question. Rewording that sentence to avoid opening with the CSWE phrasing could help avoid that.
    • I don't see how it can be rewritten to avoid the question without losing accuracy to the sources
      • Understood! If I think of a specific suggestion for rewording, want me to pass it on?
  • "Gungan society became more militaristic and tribal as a result of the conflict with the bursas"—since two different conflicts are mentioned (the subject of the article and the War of the Gungan tribes), please clarify which one of the conflicts or both. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 08:24, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Changed Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:31, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
      • I think what's still bugging me is that it doesn't seem to be chronological, but that may be a limitation of the various conflicting sources. Perhaps flipping the last two sentences (and rewording as needed) so that the outcome of the war with the bursas is put before the subsequent Gungan tribal war? Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 02:00, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • The infobox uses "Gungan Grand Army," but the article body pipelinks it as Grand Army. These should be consistent for the first usage (though the repetition of Gungan-Gungan-Gungan might get tiresome after that!)
    • Done
  • Speaking of Gungans, just a little more context for them as native sentients of Naboo (with the assumption that the reader doesn't already know what Gungans are). Similarly, a quick clarification that Amarans are a species.
    • Done
  • If the location of the attacked settlements has ever been indicated (was it the Gungan Swamp, was it Otoh Gunga...) please add that to the infobox and article body. Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 03:28, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)