Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Broden Kel Verdox

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Broden Kel Verdox

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:35, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Long name for a one mention.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Good.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
2. ~Savage 13:57, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
3. Menkooroo 14:25, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • You forgot to mention his affiliation to the Jedi Order in the body of the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:46, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
     • Actually I didn't forget. I figured that saying he was a Jedi Master would kind of take care of that. What do you think? Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:48, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
       • I think it should probably still be mentioned separately.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
         • Got it. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
2. Imperators II
   • Why is the Rise of the Empire era listed in the "Eras" field? What's the source for that? Jedi Academy is set during the New Republic era. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
     • In Jedi Academy he's only mentioned as being a Jedi of the Old Republic. So I guess that was an assumption that he was alive during the Rise of the Empire era. Removed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
3. Evil Clowns
   • What is meant by the "rest of the Yalarans" ? Ones in the galaxy who weren't hidden on the planet? If that's the case, I don't really understand why that would prompt Jaden to destroy the device. Even if that's not the case, I think a little more explanation is in order. Menkooroo 01:24, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
     • Try that. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:16, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
       • Better, but I'm still a little confused:
         • Are the Yalarans the ancient, primitive race that's earlier mentioned? If not, an article on the primitive dudes should be created. If so, the equivocation should be made clear; explicitly calling them Yalarans on the first mention oughtta do it.
           • Got it.
         • "The rest of the Yalarans..." The rest compared to whom? Are there Yalarans that aren't wiped out?
           • Fixed.
         • How does the Cult of Ragnos know about the device? It's not made clear how that follows from the Noghri wiping out the Yalarans. Some sort of cause and effect should be made clear. Menkooroo 02:45, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
           • Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:02, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

1. Bob
   • Does the source say why this dude wanted to protect the Yalarans? Who was he trying to protect them from?
     • Hmm, try that.
   • The Yalaran article calls them a species, not a civilization. Which was it? ~Savage 16:13, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:35, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

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