Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bri'n

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Bri'n

  • Nominated by: LucaRoR (Talk) 18:00, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

(Votes required: Additional 2 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

  1. My copy edit. Dentface (talk) 13:05, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:33, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:33, 9 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • So even though "somewhen" is an actual word, it doesn't feel appropriately encyclopedic and I recommend replacing it with sometime
  • Padawan should always be capitalized
  • The first page of the comic shows some skyscrapers and a winged creature
  • The aricle isn't detailed enough about how the negotiations failed
    • So the main detail I was looking for here is how Jinn and Th'er got chased through the forest and got picked up by Obi-Wan
  • That quote indicates that Th'er was native to Bri'n. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:36, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
    • All done, is this what you were looking for? LucaRoR (Talk) 05:26, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • Can you please confirm that the source indeed establishes that Bri'n had many forests?
  • Same goes for the Metal Clan wanting to destroy trees in general, not just all the trees on Bri'n.
  • Please reflect the quote in the body. I.e., what did Yoda say to Jinn regarding the planet and why. Imperators II(Talk) 09:51, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
Ratts
  • I've created pages for Th'er's species and the Priestess of Wood, which should be worked into the article.
  • Since the two non-sentient lifeforms we see in the issue aren't notable enough on their own, it might be good to detail their appearance a bit here.
  • The article doesn't currently cover the resolution of the comic, which sees Th'er seek outside help for Bri'n.
  • This section of the comic also implies that the planet's resources were valuable to offworlders, which should be mentioned.
  • As the page currently sits at 156 words, the above objections will likely require for it to be sectioned. RattsT (talk) 03:46, 9 August 2021 (UTC)

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