Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Breakfast fritter

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Breakfast fritter

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:55, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: the final addition to my chiss breakfast noms (for now)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels

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Support

1. Please review my changes (here's all of them). Samonic ^(Talk) 18:59, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:34, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 19:36, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:07, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• I think the bit about Lakris talking while her mouth was filled of Breakfast fritters should be moved before the Around 18 BBY bit since we don't know when it happened. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:57, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
  • we do know, there is an instance where she does it right before meeting Frosif. and right after Lakphro remembers that it was the tenth time that week BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:10, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Can you reword it accordingly? It seems a bit out of the blue right now. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:18, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
      • that work? BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
• Does the novel state the breakfast fritters originated from Celwis? If not, please modify the infobox. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:13, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:39, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• A little confused by what "assimilate the food" is supposed to mean. Maybe rewording it will help? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:06, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
  • huh, I didnt do that. reworded, anyway BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:20, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:07, 4 December 2022 (UTC)