Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Braccio campaign

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Contents

  • 1 Braccio campaign
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 CC-8
        • 1.1.2.2 Thrawn
        • 1.1.2.3 Manoof
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Braccio campaign

  • Nominated by: Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:26, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Next: Solha's family.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:32, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:21, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:12, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:33, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • I'm confused as to whether the Battle of the Poln system is Nuso Esva's incursion as it's not linked in the body Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:27, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Sorry about that. The link has been added. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 11:52, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  • It's in the category for events of the Galactic Civil War but there's nothing in the article tying it to that Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:40, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
    • After studying the category further, that was for events unrelated to the CCW that took place in 5 BBY-19 ABY, not military campaigns, so I've removed it. I added another category. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 07:19, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
Thrawn
  • Category:Military campaigns needs to be added. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:03, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
    • I distinctly remember adding this, I have no idea what happened. Added. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 14:14, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
      • No problem. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:32, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Was the campaign launched by 0 ABY or were the species almost extinct by that year? This sentence needs to be rephrased to make it clearer, perhaps split into two Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:39, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
    • I've sent you a message through Discord regarding this objection.
  • Can we put “6 different species” in the infobox opposing Esva? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:39, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Sure.
  • Ref 2 confuses me. It reads that the incursion occurs in 0 ABY then the Braccio campaign, but you say it occurs by that year = before 0 ABY? Shouldn’t it be 0 ABY or around 0 ABY? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:39, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Reworded. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:49, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:33, 26 September 2022 (UTC)