Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Braccio campaign

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Braccio campaign

• Nominated by: Samonic 08:26, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Next: Solha's family.
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:32, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:21, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:12, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:33, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• I'm confused as to whether the Battle of the Poln system is Nuso Esva's incursion as it's not linked in the body Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:27, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Sorry about that. The link has been added. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:52, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• It's in the category for events of the Galactic Civil War but there's nothing in the article tying it to that Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:40, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
  • After studying the category further, that was for events unrelated to the CCW that took place in 5 BBY-19 ABY, not military campaigns, so I've removed it. I added another category. Samonic ^(Talk) 07:19, 21 September 2022 (UTC)

Thrawn

• Category:Military campaigns needs to be added. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:03, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
  • I distinctly remember adding this, I have no idea what happened. Added. Samonic ^(Talk) 14:14, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
    • No problem. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:32, 20 September 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• Was the campaign launched by 0 ABY or were the species almost extinct by that year? This sentence needs to be rephrased to make it clearer, perhaps split into two Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:39, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  • I've sent you a message through Discord regarding this objection.
• Can we put “6 different species” in the infobox opposing Esva? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:39, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Sure.
• Ref 2 confuses me. It reads that the incursion occurs in 0 ABY then the Braccio campaign, but you say it occurs by that year = before 0 ABY? Shouldn’t it be 0 ABY or around 0 ABY? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:39, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Reworded. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:49, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:33, 26 September 2022 (UTC)