Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Boring IV

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Boring IV

Nominated by: Outer Shell Electrons (talk) 22:05, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments: It's not as boring as it sounds! (It's pretty boring)
Date Archived: 01:38, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 124 words (0 introduction, 77 body, 47 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 90 words (0 introduction, 57 body, 33 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

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"mission to look into the death of Arkiin Smir to learn the whereabouts of his accomplices" it would be better here to avoid the consecutive "to ..." here, either "and to ..." or "in order to..." should be appropriate to connect that last clause.
- Changed.
~~Context for Smir, please.~~
- Added more context.
  - Context for the Luminous Knives, please :P Imperators II^(Talk) 19:20, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
    - Added MORE context :P
~~If it's a planet, we infer from the numeral in its name its orbital position, which should be noted both in article text and in infobox.~~
- Added orbital position.
Do you know if French language would distinguish between prepositions like "on the planet" vs "at the planet"? Because currently we generally take the former to imply a physical surface for the planet (and therefore the terrestrial class). Imperators II^(Talk) 07:40, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- The magazine uses the word "sur" which could translate to "on" "at" or "over", so I changed it to "at the planet" since it doesn't make any clarification as to whether there is a surface/is terrestrial or not.

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC)