Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bombing on Kalevala

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Bombing on Kalevala

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:53, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My first event nomination, which was written as a companion piece for my future nomination of Kalevala.

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Cwedin^(talk) 00:11, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:59, April 10, 2016 (UTC)
3. LoLuX12 (talk) 21:04, April 11, 2016 (UTC)
4. Manoof (talk) 07:08, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:19, April 23, 2016 (UTC)
6. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:14, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Cwedin

• Could you add that it took place in the morning, and that Palpatine addressed it in the Senate? - Cwedin^(talk) 23:26, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
  • Done, though I could use suggestion on how to implement the time of day into the entry. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 23:59, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Maybe something along the lines of "...engineered a bombing one morning on the planet Kalevala..." - Cwedin^(talk) 00:11, April 5, 2016 (UTC)

Ayrehead02

• Could you add the year of release for the episode to the BTS? Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:12, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 00:19, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
• Feel free to disagree, but I reckon tt might be worth saying that it was morning for Coruscant when the bombing took place, since it's on Coruscant that Palpatine makes the statement. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:12, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • Hidaglo has confirmed that time occurs simultaneously across the galaxy in the Star Wars Universe, so I don't think this is necessary. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 00:19, April 5, 2016 (UTC)

Imperators II

• Hmmm... This may be a slight pain, but the full name of the article should be included (since the name's not conjectural) and bolded upon its first mention per WP:MOS. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:52, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • I've reverted the article to the version prior to adding Cwedin's suggestion, as "later that day" should cover it. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 06:00, April 10, 2016 (UTC)
    • Well done. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:59, April 10, 2016 (UTC)

Manoof

• Could we get some context on Clone Wars and Kalevala. We need to at least know Kalevala is a planet. Manoof (talk) 06:49, April 17, 2016 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:33, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

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