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Bogg Tyrell
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:32, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Delayed companions to Magaloof
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Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:35, 26 July 2022 (UTC)- Samonic
10:39, 27 July 2022 (UTC) - You cannot deny the truth that is your family. RattsT (talk) 16:44, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 09:55, 30 July 2022 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:13, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
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Braha
Shouldn't the name sharing with Ratt Tyrell get mentioned in the article body?Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:46, 26 July 2022 (UTC)- They actually don't share a surname, Ratts Tyerell has an extra e. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
- Well that really tripped me up there haha. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:35, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
- They actually don't share a surname, Ratts Tyerell has an extra e. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:04, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
So, you have a twin sister?
The first sentence reads a bit odd to me. Could the "represented" clause be moved closer to the subject?- Hmm, it looks ok to me. What's the exact rewording you're suggesting? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:49, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
- Something like "Tyrell was an Aleena female who represented her homeworld Aleen in the Galactic Senate." Leading the paragraph with a sentence made up of multiple clauses makes it a bit choppy, at least for me. RattsT (talk) 15:56, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
- I think it's worth keeping in that its the Aleena homeworld so I've split the sentence instead. Does that work? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:18, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
- Something like "Tyrell was an Aleena female who represented her homeworld Aleen in the Galactic Senate." Leading the paragraph with a sentence made up of multiple clauses makes it a bit choppy, at least for me. RattsT (talk) 15:56, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
- Hmm, it looks ok to me. What's the exact rewording you're suggesting? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:49, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
Despite them not having the same exact spelling, I think a note in the BTS that there is no IU connection between Bogg and Ratts would alleviate any confusion.- Eh, I really prefer to avoid ever stating that something hasn't been clarified where possible. We use to do it a lot and it lead to some really bloated cluttered BTS sections. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:49, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
Would Category:Pilots be appropriate here?RattsT (talk) 11:56, 27 July 2022 (UTC)- No, I'd say that's for professional pilots rather then just anyone who has ever piloted a vehicle. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:49, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
Just rewatched the scene and noticed that Bogg can be seen leaving the Diner with a drink and staggering out the door, which should be noted.RattsT (talk) 12:12, 27 July 2022 (UTC)- Well spotted! I totally missed that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:49, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Is there a reason why the BMF issue is listed after Complete Locations? According to our calculations, it released beforehand.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:06, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
- Ah totally missed that, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:48, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:12, 2 August 2022 (UTC)