Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Blitzball

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Blitzball

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  1. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:29, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:24, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
  3. Nicely done! Congratulations on your first CA! Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:09, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:44, 16 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonicball
  • Missing link for Water.
    • done
  • Can you establish that "Mill Alibeth" accompanied Skywalker when you introduce the latter? — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 07:17, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
  • "Blitzball was a water sport played by younglings on the planet Langston during the early weeks of the Clone Wars, a conflict between the Galactic Republic and a group of secessionists." After the Clone Wars, the game was not played? — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 18:32, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
    • theres no source says whether it was or wasnt, best not to assume BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:01, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Please reword it, then.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:07, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
  • You're sourcing the first sentence to a date ref; there should only be one Brotherhood reference at the end of the article, remove the one after "secessionists." Add one just before the date.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 07:10, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Let me know if there are any issues with this copy-edit. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 20:50, 29 May 2022 (UTC)
    • the book says "nearby" lake, but its fine to remove if we dont want it sounding exactly like thr book. could go either way, i dont mind.BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:00, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
      • I removed it because you don't introduce the visit to Langston's mining district prior, and I find it like the article was IU or a IU source while it shouldn't? Not really sure how to describe it.
        • does that work?
  • Can you divide the second sentence? That sentence is currently 58 words long and most of the article. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:14, 31 May 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
Manoof
  • Can we remove the mining district in the infobox, The way it is, it's kinda bypassing the nested bullet points thing by having mining district after the comma (Eg *Australia **Sydney, New South Wales instead of *Australia **New South Wales ***Sydney) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:48, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
  • I think, given the name, we can say its a ball sport and so it can go in Category:Ball sports Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:48, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Need some linking in ref 2 - Brotherhood and year Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:48, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
  • I think we should add the Final Fantasy wiki's Blitzball article link to external links and BTS Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:48, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
  • The lake seems to be a distinct location, it should get its own article (also needs to be linked in the infobox) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:07, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Please provide context for Final Fantasy X. This is obviously not stated in the tweet so you need another source (like the game itself).
    • hows that?
  • Please also un-abbreviate the NHL. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:27, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:44, 16 June 2022 (UTC)