Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Black Shred Water clan

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Black Shred Water clan

• Nominated by: SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 07:21, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 14:58, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 40 words (0 introduction, 17 body, 23 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Boats1014 (talk) 06:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 22:19, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 20:42, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
4. AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:53, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:29, 30 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

Boats

• Since Black Shred Water clan does not have it's own entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia, and is only referenced in Sebulba's entry, it should be under sources as {{CSWECite|III|133|Sebulba}}. Boats1014 (talk) 09:36, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 03:16, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• There's no need to mention its mention in the CSWE in the BTS, that's just repeating what can be established by looking at the sources section Lewisr (talk) 19:01, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:31, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
• BTS needs to include a release year for the book Lewisr (talk) 19:59, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Added. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:42, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
    • For the record all you needed to add was just the year, but I've changed that for you Lewisr (talk) 22:19, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

AC

• You could combine the two sentences of your body for better flow. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:39, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 08:11, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:58, 30 June 2023 (UTC)