Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bitter Pill Company (second nomination)

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Contents

  • 1 Bitter Pill Company
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.2 Zed
        • 1.1.2.3 Anil
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Bitter Pill Company

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:33, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:30, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:20, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 02:29, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  4. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:27, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 17:44, April 20, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • "The company was sent to a "trash heap" planet..." It would be better to say the company "considered" it a trash heap. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:30, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 20:39, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
      • Now you can say "they considered" it a trash heap, right now it's unknown in the body who does so. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:32, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
        • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:07, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • Unless the company is mentioned outside of the quote, I don't think that it can 100% be assumed that it consisted of rebel troopers since that's never said. Zed42 (talk) 03:10, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:07, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
  • Infantry is infobox-exclusive. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:23, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 16:27, April 17, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:44, April 20, 2020 (UTC)