Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Binog Mesa

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Binog Mesa

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 01:44, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 12:02, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 304 words (89 introduction, 197 body, 18 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 162 words (0 introduction, 144 body, 18 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)

(Votes required: 1 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

  1. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:17, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:17, 21 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

DFaceG
  • While I don't remember for sure if you have to pass through the Binog Mesa to complete the game, it isn't a matter of completion whether or not Cal was on Bogano - that has to happen for the game to end regardless. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:52, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Splox/boglings context
  • Judging off the image, this article should describe the white, stone cliffs as a feature of the location. Seems like there's some hanging greenery off a few of the cliffs as well.
  • "during his secret mission to rebuild the Jedi Order, Jedi Padawan Cal Kestis journeyed to Bogano." missing a ref at the end here?—spookywillowwtalk 00:27, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
  • "The mesa was visited by Jedi Master Eno Cordova and Jedi Padawan Cal Kestis."—intro should split this sentence or otherwise specify that they did not visit together as a pair, as it currently implies.—spookywillowwtalk 18:41, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Do we know if the poncho was called "Pathfinder" IU or is that just a game mechanic for the player to collect different ponchos? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:29, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You can mention that there's also white and red slopes of the limestone between flat areas of the grass. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed.
      • You still don't mention the color. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:31, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
        • Addressed.
  • Should be room for another image in the body, I can try and grab you something during my play through if you let me know what you'd like. I think I already might have a screenshot of the bog rats and splox around the chest if that'd work. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
  • I'd mention that the poncho materials were in a crate in a crevasse or sunken area of the mesa (not quite sure what to call that area) and that Kestis had to fight through the bog rats and splox surrounding it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed.
  • I've made a page for the Pathfinder poncho since it's a named subject. I've been treating the ponchos as just individual named pieces of clothing so far, but is there something that describes them as styles in the game? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Sorry, clicked save too soon on this review. This isn't actually a poncho anyway, but an outfit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:51, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Haven't got to it yet, but I assume there's a quote from the binog mural that could be added to the history section. The quote about the binog being comfortable where it is could also work in the article as well. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Huh, the quote is just "What's this." So I'll leave it up to you if you want to include that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:32, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
  • The intro's just a little short for the body length. I'd add another sentence or two. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:31, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. Will close nomination as it is over word count. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 12:00, 25 March 2023 (UTC)

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