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Bib'vena's mother
- Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:24, 4 November 2022 (UTC)
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Support
—spookywillowwtalk 13:37, 5 November 2022 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:27, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
- BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 16:28, 14 November 2022 (UTC) - - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:03, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
- I realize this vote is unnecessary, but I may as well truly finish my review. Samonic
(Talk) 19:02, 20 November 2022 (UTC) - Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:54, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
Object
Spooky
Might we nab a year date for the Endor battle?- We might, but I had a look at other similar CAs (to grab a canon dating reference) which gave the context for the battle without noting the year. Ok if we leave it out? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:27, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
- Mhm fair enough; some have it, some don't.—spookywillowwtalk 13:37, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
- We might, but I had a look at other similar CAs (to grab a canon dating reference) which gave the context for the battle without noting the year. Ok if we leave it out? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:27, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
Would it be worth mentioning Bib'vena's species for context? Up to you though—asking as I've seen it done on some other SAs where the child's species is known.—spookywillowwtalk 02:46, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
Ziara
passed this on to her son - would you be open to rewording this? as it is it sounds like she passed something physical to her soncontext for Uprising would be helpfulBloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:42, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
Samonic
Do we have an article for the Uprising's fight against Adelhard and his remnant?Samonic (Talk) 20:35, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- As in the Iron Blockade? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:44, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- If that's the fight the article mentions, yes. If the Iron Blockade is the fight that the article is referring to, it should be linked. Samonic (Talk) 20:40, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
- Added Manoof (he/him/his) 03:56, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
- Added Manoof (he/him/his)
- If that's the fight the article mentions, yes. If the Iron Blockade is the fight that the article is referring to, it should be linked. Samonic
- As in the Iron Blockade? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:44, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
Thrawn
birth date needed (by around 4 aby based on the date of the mention). -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:46, 16 November 2022 (UTC)- We don't know Bib'vena's age so we can't extrapolate an approximate birth date (is he 16? is he 56?). It's sufficient to say he was active during X event to provide that context, but we couldn't provide anything more to say when he was born other than prior to X event, which I think is already implied. Manoof (he/him/his) 11:52, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
- We don't know Bib'vena's age so we can't extrapolate an approximate birth date (is he 16? is he 56?). It's sufficient to say he was active during X event to provide that context, but we couldn't provide anything more to say when he was born other than prior to X event, which I think is already implied. Manoof (he/him/his)
Braha
The second (and last) sentence is a run-on. I would highly recommend either revising there, either by splitting it or other means.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:21, 26 November 2022 (UTC)- Almost missed it because it was at the start, split. Manoof (he/him/his) 22:32, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
- Almost missed it because it was at the start, split. Manoof (he/him/his)
Can the Battle of Endor get a date?Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:55, 27 November 2022 (UTC)- It can but I'd rather not in this instance and there's ample precedent for not needing a date for the Battle of Endor :) Manoof (he/him/his) 03:08, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- I'd disagree. I'm not aware of the precedents against it, but I feel it's always beneficial to add a more numerical scope to the timeline with a date. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 02:30, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
- Dropped a note on discord but you may have missed it: "Recent CANs that note the battle of Endor without providing a year Unidentified Noble Court throne contender Pelos Chanward Chanward's personal bodyguard Ozz (Ugnaught)" Manoof (he/him/his) 14:40, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
- I should have clarified, I dislike what those precedents you've listed do, since I think it looks better to provide a numerical scope of the timeline (along with a more notable one in the fact that it's compared to Battle of Endor). So my argument still stands. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:00, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
- I still think it's unnecessary, but added Manoof (he/him/his) 14:22, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- I still think it's unnecessary, but added Manoof (he/him/his)
- I should have clarified, I dislike what those precedents you've listed do, since I think it looks better to provide a numerical scope of the timeline (along with a more notable one in the fact that it's compared to Battle of Endor). So my argument still stands. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:00, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
- Dropped a note on discord but you may have missed it: "Recent CANs that note the battle of Endor without providing a year Unidentified Noble Court throne contender Pelos Chanward Chanward's personal bodyguard Ozz (Ugnaught)" Manoof (he/him/his)
- I'd disagree. I'm not aware of the precedents against it, but I feel it's always beneficial to add a more numerical scope to the timeline with a date. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 02:30, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
- It can but I'd rather not in this instance and there's ample precedent for not needing a date for the Battle of Endor :) Manoof (he/him/his)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:54, 22 December 2022 (UTC)