Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle of Malastare Narrows

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Battle of Malastare Narrows

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 00:53, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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Support

1. Review completed on Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:23, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 02:27, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 16:33, 5 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Rise of the Separatists is used to cite information related to the event yet is not listed in Sources. Does it actually mention the subject? UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:59, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
  • No. Just used to cite that Trench was part of the Corporate Alliance, therefore making them a part of this battle. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:32, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Then there needs to be a note that makes a connection. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:42, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Is that good? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:47, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Looking at it now, it feels speculatory as Trench could've joined them after the battle. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:37, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
• I don't see the point of mentioning the date of the start of the Clone Wars if it's nowhere to be seen in the body. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:37, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:33, 5 October 2021 (UTC)