Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle of Corrdair

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Battle of Corrdair

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:29, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Well, I had to write it in order to CAnom Limm Nix. It's a good thing that there is no limit on CAnoms.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:16, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • The quote doesn't seem to fit very well, it doesn't even mention the battle. Are there any other quotes?
     • The whole reason that the battle was mentioned in the databank was to give place to Limm Nix, so the battle is mentioned once in a two sentence databank entry. So, that's about the best that I can do.
   • "The Empire sent All Terrain Missile Platforms to attack the Alliance, including Major Limm Nix." makes it sound like Nix is a AT-MP. Please reword.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:16, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
     • Heh, fixed. Thanks for the review EJ. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
2. Imperators II
   • "during the height of the Galactic Empire" has to be sourced. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
     • Thanks for looking it over, but it is sourced. Someone really seriously messed this article up while I was sleeping, so you might have seen that result. But, take a look at it now. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:35, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
       • Uh, no, the statement is not sourced. It only has a note explaining the applicability of an OOU publishing era. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
         • Take a look now. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

1. SinSam
   • Corrdair should be linked (Or Corrdair system). Comments on Dan Wallace's blog give me reason to believe that the next Atlas companion update will include Corrdair (and Polomie). SinisterSamurai 20:27, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
     • I don't know if that'd be wise. We don't know anything about Corrdair. For all we know it might be a city. So I think we should leave it blank until it is verified. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
       • Then it'll have to link to a stub, or just be a redlink. SinisterSamurai 00:35, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
         • Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:57, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
           • Welcome to hyper-inclusionism. :) SinisterSamurai 15:42, August 20, 2011 (UTC)
             • That's for me. :P Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:46, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

1. Cav
   • The location of the battle is not mentioned in the infobox.
     • Added.
   • to attack Major Limm Nix and the rest of the Alliance - the use of "the rest of the Alliance" implies that the entire Alliance was present at the battle, which I'm sure is not the case. Please reword to remove the implication. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:16, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
     • Reworded.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:18, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Please mention the era in the body of the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
  • Done.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)