Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle between the Kwa and the Rakata

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Battle between the Kwa and the Rakata

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 23:24, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Dawn of the Jedi begins

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Cade nomming a non-TOR article? What is the world coming to? 501st dogma^(talk) 00:40, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:54, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:09, September 14, 2013 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:06, September 23, 2013 (UTC)
5. Fe Nite (talk) 21:28, September 29, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. 501st
   • First of all, you bold War in the body, while you should have bolded battle or something else instead.
     • It's "made war" - an expression. I bolded both words.
   • You need to mention that the Kwa took heavy causalities on the body.
     • Done.
   • "Following the battle, the Kwa destroyed or disabled most of the remaining gates across the galaxy and retreated to their homeworld of Dathomir, though some like A'nang remained behind on worlds such as Tython." The first time I read this, I thought A'nang was a gate, so perhaps a bit of context on him is required to clear that up.
     • Done.
   • Good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:26, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
     • Danke. Cade Calrayn 00:29, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
       • No. Fe Nite (talk) 21:28, September 29, 2013 (UTC)
         • What? Cade Calrayn 21:47, September 29, 2013 (UTC)

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