Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Baris

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Baris

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:32, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I hate something like that. Authors name seven characters in two lines and never mention them again. And people like me have to write articles about it. "Sigh"

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Good job.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:37, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
2. —Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 21:58, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:59, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object

• Same objections from your other clone.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:30, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
  • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:28, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
    • Infobox still needs to be reloaded. :P --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:24, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
      • Aaaaannnnddd done :P Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:32, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

1. Jang
   • If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
     • See above. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
       • Still remains JangFett ^(Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
   • "However, Baris was killed during the war and later mourned, along with all other clone commandos who had died until that point, by the Mandalorian training sergeants Kal Skirata and Walon Vau in 19 BBY." I can see this sentence being separated into two sentences because as it stands it can be confusing. Mention that he died sometime during the war in one sentence, and then go ahead and say his death was mourned by ___. Also be sure to paraphrase your wording, Lee.
     • See above. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
       • Still remains JangFett ^(Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
   • Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Baris, not "Baris" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
     • See above. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
       • Lee, I did not say to remove the quotation marks. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:12, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

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