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Bardelberan 7
- Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 22:21, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: More WP:AST - WP:GE
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Support
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 05:09, 9 May 2021 (UTC) - Liverpool92
22:46, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
Take 'em all the way, Ruiz. Imperators II(Talk) 10:17, 11 May 2021 (UTC)- Cwedin(talk) 16:31, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 19:46, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
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Imp
Please incorporate the information from the quote into the article.Imperators II(Talk) 09:30, 10 May 2021 (UTC)- Expanded to include context behind the quote--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:19, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
Right now it's unclear from the wording whether it was the shuttle or the Falcon that was leaving Galagolos at the time of the encounter. Please reword that to clarify.Imperators II(Talk) 15:02, 10 May 2021 (UTC)- Fixed--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:29, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
In the previous revision of the article you used the preposition "on" with the planet's name. Is that used in the source? If it does, that would imply it was a terrestrial planet.Imperators II(Talk) 08:32, 11 May 2021 (UTC)- That was a mistake from me, the book doesn't use the preposition "on" at all for the planet.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:09, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:13, 16 May 2021 (UTC)