Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/BIX

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

BIX

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:01, December 19, 2017 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

Support

1. Love these Droids articles! - Cwedin^(talk) 02:42, December 19, 2017 (UTC)
   • Thanks! Hopefully, if this Fox deal goes through, we may be able to see a new home video release of the series at some point! - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:47, December 19, 2017 (UTC)

   Imperators II^(Talk) 10:04, January 10, 2018 (UTC)

Object

IMP

• Is there an article for Tawntoom's team? If not, should there be?
  • No article, as of now. No real name besides “Tawtoom team,” and only one identified member outside of generics. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 16:48, January 4, 2018 (UTC)
• "substituted for by Mungo Baobab and C-3PO, respectively" - the use of the word "respectively" here indicates that it is clear whom each of the pair substituted, but it isn't so. Please rephrase.
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 20:14, January 6, 2018 (UTC)
• You should note the different capitalization variants of the droid's name.
  • One objection remaining. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:05, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
    • Could I get your opinion on something? How should we consider blog posts authored by people who've written official material in regards to Legends, like Tim Veekhoven? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 22:22, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
      • If you're talking about the sports blogs, then we treat those as official, but only list them under Sources if they contain unique info. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:00, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
        • Cool; that's where BIX's revised capitalization comes from. I just wanted to make sure that it was official before I expanded the Bts per your suggestion. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 23:03, January 9, 2018 (UTC)
          • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:22, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
• Please create a category for the Umboo Racing Team members.
  • Created. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 18:52, January 5, 2018 (UTC)
• Review note: regarding links to Wikipedia articles, use those only in BTS sections, and, if necessary, create Wookieepedia articles to link to instead. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:06, January 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • Noted. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 18:52, January 5, 2018 (UTC)
• 229 words now by my count, let's see an intro. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:05, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
  • By my count, its currently sitting at 214, barring the quote and Bts tile, of course. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 16:49, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
    • Per CAN rule 12, "counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, [an article] must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc)." Imperators II^(Talk) 16:55, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
      • That should have read as title. Now sitting at a cool 233, so I can work a little with expanding the intro. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 16:57, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
        • Definitely. You should never leave an intro at a length of just one sentence. Also please break up the Bio paragraph. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:00, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
          • How does that look? - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:23, January 10, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

• Archiving the nomination with the nominator's approval. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:28, January 10, 2018 (UTC)