Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Attack on the Tsyk system

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Attack on the Tsyk system

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:49, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:An article about a dot on a map.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Good job. Imperators II(Talk) 22:02, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 23:01, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:43, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Winterz (talk) 22:15, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Imperators II
    • The map on p. 219 says the yellow dots represent systems attacked by the Vong, so the article will have to be moved accordingly. Imperators II(Talk) 19:52, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • Please mention the context of the battle, i.e. the preceding battle of the campaign and the route taken by the Vong to attack the system. Imperators II(Talk) 20:02, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
      • I added the preceding battle and the way in which the Vong reached the system. Is there a following battle I should add as well? The map shows Tysk as a dead end. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:24, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • Please provide an image from the map.
      • Uploaded the best quality I can and tagged it with the quality template. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:11, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure the info about the Tsyklen and Hutt species is relevant to the battle.
      • Removed it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:11, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
        • Actually, scrap the entire part about Tsyk—it just has nothing to with the battle. Imperators II(Talk) 21:22, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • "a map detailing conflicts in the galaxy during the war called "collapse of the Core."" Please clean this part up. What war? Are the conflicts called "collapse of the Core" or the war is? Imperators II(Talk) 20:47, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
      • I've cleaned it up a bit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:11, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • Actually, the map only says the Vong attacked the system, and does not say that there was any resistance to the attack (i.e., a battle). So please move the article to "Attack on the Tsyk system". Imperators II(Talk) 21:22, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
      • Moved it and the article on the previous battle. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:36, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • It seems to me that the Online Companion reference isn't necessary. Imperators II(Talk) 21:39, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
  2. 501st
    • You might want to take the size of the infobox picture down a bit, as to remove some of the blurriness, like this. 501st dogma(talk) 13:09, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

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