Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Attack on an Imperial outpost (Choyyssyk)

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Attack on an Imperial outpost (Choyyssyk)

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:45, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 21:03, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 120 words (0 introduction, 98 body, 22 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 03:30, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:52, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
  3. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  4. —SnowedLightning (they/them) 20:00, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  5. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:11, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • It's specified that Choyyssyk spent months in the refinery, which narrows down roughly when the attack was Lewisr (talk) 02:39, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Should have addressed it now, just wanna confirm that between 15 and 14 BBY would be the correct dates. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 16:05, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
      • Hmm tough, usually we would say months before might just be c. 14 BBY, but we don't know exactly how long into 14 BBY the game is and for how many months exactly Choyyssyk spent in the refinery. What do you think? Lewisr (talk) 17:13, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
        • I would agree in this instance, so I adjusted the article accordingly. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:18, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
          • Sounds good! Lewisr (talk) 21:25, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
  • The Partisans need some context Lewisr (talk) 21:25, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
  • I think it's worth including that Choyyssyk spent months in imprisonment, preferably in the bit where you mention him being freed Lewisr (talk) 14:43, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
Marvac
  • Please add a disambiguation page as there is another Attack on an Imperial outpost article. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 07:14, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Make sure to state that Cal Kestis is a fugitive.Marvacian Archivist (talk) 07:14, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Hi. Make sure to add a comma after Empire in this sentence and also can you find a synonym for during to avoid repetition, "An attack on an Imperial outpost was launched[1] around 14 BBY[2] during the Imperial Era by the Kashyyyk resistance against the Galactic Empire during the latter's occupation of the planet Kashyyyk." Marvacian Archivist (talk) 07:38, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
Fan
  • The infobox gives the location as Kashyyyk, which is technically infobox-exclusive as the article doesn't directly state that the attack took place on the planet. Is it even confirmed the attack took place on Kashyyyk? I would say if it doesn't, we can't assume so, but if it does the article body should specify its location. Fan26 (Talk) 17:58, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
    • The game's context and dialogue heavily implies the attack took place on Kashyyyk. I rearranged the words in the body to convey that the event took place on Kashyyyk. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 14:41, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
      • How heavily implied is it? We can't assume Fan26 (Talk) 01:41, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
        • Well, the resistance which Choyyssyk is a part of is actively involved in the liberation of Kashyyyk and that he's imprisoned on Kashyyyk prison. The full dialogue also establishes that he works with Tarfful. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 03:21, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
          • It's an easy inference to make, but we still cannot assume that the mission took place on Kashyyyk without confirmation Fan26 (Talk) 16:07, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
            • Removed all mentions of the event taking place on Kashyyyk. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 00:19, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Leaving this as a comment rather than objection, but since this is a canon page (and also a non-conjecturally titled page), the current page at Attack on an Imperial outpost can be moved to allow for this be without the parentheses Lewisr (talk) 17:15, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Aware I supported, but whilst writing a similar objection on Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Imperial commander (Zeffo), it dawned on me that Mari telling Cal about the attack is optional also, so I guess it would need a game mechanics template for that part here? Lewisr (talk) 19:59, 12 July 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:02, 17 August 2023 (UTC)