Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Attack on Fury Station

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Attack on Fury Station

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 17:13, November 20, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Dawn of the Jedi enters the Force War!

(5 ECs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:45, November 26, 2013 (UTC)
2. They followed proper military tactics. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:53, November 28, 2013 (UTC)
3. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:08, November 28, 2013 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:28, November 29, 2013 (UTC)
5. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:52, December 2, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Ayrehead
   • Could you split the first sentence it's a bit long.
   • You don't mention the settled worlds anywhere in the body as the opposing force. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:48, November 20, 2013 (UTC)
     • Both done. Cade Calrayn 19:25, November 26, 2013 (UTC)
2. Preem
   • Can we get a bit of context on the settled worlds?
     • Done.
   • Can you reword the last sentence a bit? When you say "From there" do you mean they captured the two gas giants from that station, or they moved on to capture the gas giants after capturing the station? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:40, November 27, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Cade Calrayn 21:27, November 27, 2013 (UTC)

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