Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Atomically aerated cream

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Atomically aerated cream

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:11, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Sounds so artificial

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:01, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 23:03, April 17, 2014 (UTC)
3. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:47, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:11, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
5. Cade Calrayn 21:24, May 13, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Should Bakura be mentioned somewhere? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:07, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Bakuran is a pipelink to it, but I've changed it to a direct link. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:03, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

Code-8

• Wrong era template. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 12:09, April 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • Huh. Don't know how I managed that. Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:39, April 17, 2014 (UTC)

Cadeth

• How exactly is the cream's homeworld Coruscant?
  • Changed to right section of infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • That's still incorrect and speculation. Please apply the potato objections to this article as well.
      • How is it speculation or incorrect? It was served at Dex's on Coruscant, meaning it was found on Coruscant at Dex's. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:22, May 5, 2014 (UTC)
• Dining at Dex's is italicized in the BTS, but you don't italicize it in the Sources section. Please find the correct formatting and use it for all of your articles.
  • Corrected to italicised. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• "The dish also included namana custard and was served for 3.7AurebeshSans-Serif credit at the eatery known as Dex's Diner on the planet Coruscant[1] until the diner's destruction during the first two years of the Galactic Empire's reign.[2]" My objection about the destruction stands, but if you find evidence to keep the destruction part, please split this setence.
  • Split and destruction fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • The destruction sentence is unnecessary at this point, so I've removed it.
• Context on Hyperspace.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• "Atomically aerated cream was first mentioned in the 2009 Star Wars Hyperspace exclusive article, Dining at Dex's, which was written by Gregory Walker." As Dining at Dex's is not the only Hyperspace-exclusive article, you cannot put a comma between article and Dining.
  • Removed comma. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• Hyperspace-exclusive should have a dash. Cade Calrayn 04:02, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

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