- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Ashas Rine
- Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 23:15, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Why not?
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:AST
(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)
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Support
- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
(talk) 02:51, 9 November 2021 (UTC) - Nice work. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 03:35, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
Nicely done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:14, 9 November 2021 (UTC)- OOM 224 17:56, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 17:58, 10 November 2021 (UTC) - UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:57, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
Whoa, this is very clean for a second nom. Can we get a little context on who Lourna Dee is, though?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:12, 9 November 2021 (UTC)- Context added. SilverSunbird (talk) 00:18, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
I'd like to see it mentioned that Zeetar was a Talpini when you first introduce him, otherwise it's not entirely clear that you're referring to him by "the Talpini."JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:56, 9 November 2021 (UTC)- Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:00, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
Per J-Mac above, very damn clean for a second nomination. Nice work. However, in the BTS, since there is only one source in which Ashas Rine appears in, the use of "first" in the BTS is unnecessary, so it would just be "Ashas Rine was introduced..." or something along those lines.Erebus Chronus (Talk) 03:06, 9 November 2021 (UTC)- Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 03:16, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
OOM
Would it be more precise to specify "the Jedi Order and the Galactic Republic"?OOM 224 23:02, 9 November 2021 (UTC)- Yeeesss... yes it would. Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 23:16, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Need to mention the fact that Ashas Rine was shown in a hologram. Currently the hologram article is only linked in the BTS.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:00, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
- Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 19:51, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Just a thing here: is it a good idea to mention how similar Ashas Rine's name is to Ashas Ree somewhere, or is that extraneous info? SilverSunbird (talk) 00:18, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
- You could use a Youmay tag at the top to direct them to Ashas Ree. You may also be able to create a disambiguation page for Ashas instead. Either is your choice, though. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 02:47, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:57, 17 November 2021 (UTC)