Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ancient Kubaz

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Ancient Kubaz

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 03:25, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 18:54, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 144 words (0 introduction, 112 body, 32 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 146 words (0 introduction, 116 body, 30 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:THR

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Support

1. I remember writing this one:P Lewisr (talk) 21:19, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
2. CometSmudge (talk) 02:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
3. Wok142 (talk) 18:52, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comet

• I think when Vitus says "that system is so distant", he means the system where the Kubaz live, not the system of writing, since it doesn't really make sense for a writing system to be distant. CometSmudge (talk) 17:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Fair point, tweaked in.—spookywilloww^talk 20:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
    • The second sentence still says that the writing system was distant CometSmudge (talk) 20:58, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Ah, did nuke, forgot it was mentioned twice.—spookywilloww^talk 02:08, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Wok

• Vitus needs to be introduced
• First sentence - the "in written form" feels unnecessary to include since it's right after you say "a writing system" so I think that can be removed Wok142 (talk) 05:24, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Ah yeah, first one was accidentally nixed with the above objection's sentence removal, so sorted that and the second point.—spookywilloww^talk 05:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
• Oop last thing I just saw, there appears to be a redlink in a citation? Does that article need to be created or should the link just be removed? Wok142 (talk) 06:21, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Was just supposed to be a pipelink to homeworld so added that.—spookywilloww^talk 06:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:53, 30 September 2024 (UTC)