Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ameron

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Ameron

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Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 20:32, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
Review completed via #article-nominations OOM 224 (he/him) 21:21, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 21:10, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:26, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
—spookywilloww^talk 18:02, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

Star Wars: Timelines dates the Lando miniseries to 10 BBY so that can be updated in the date note Lewisr (talk) 01:55, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:51, 13 May 2023 (UTC)

Copy-edit: it is best to avoid vague wording like "in the galaxy" and "could be used" and be more concise instead. I took out any mention of the galaxy since virtually everything takes place in it so it is an unnecessary specification, but I'm not sure whether the comic provides any indication as to where the cape was being sold?
I'm not sure as to whether we should be making the assumption that the cape being sold in the comic was indeed ameron, since Lando disputes the fact. Is there any further context in the comic itself that could help with determining whether the cape can be said to be indeed ameron? OOM 224 (he/him) 22:24, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
- There's nothing to really suggest that it's real or fake. Is it better to state that Borkus attempted to sell Lando a cape that he claimed was ameron skin? AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:02, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  - Yeah, I think it would be prudent. OOM 224 (he/him) 17:47, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
    - Adjusted article to fit. How should I handle the appearances. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:14, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:02, 22 May 2023 (UTC)