- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
Amden vor Keioidian (second nomination)
- Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 00:31, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another disgraced CAN back from the dead!
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR & WP:NOVELS
(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
(Votes required: Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)
Support
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:05, 30 August 2021 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 18:34, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Object
Fan
The Galactic Republic proper should be in the infobox, not the army.Fan26 (Talk) 16:14, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
Should specify who attacked the squad.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:10, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
- That quote looks pretty significant to this character. I'm surprised it hasn't been documented in the body. UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:21, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
- The short story opens with Amden vor Keioidian already being wounded, and we aren't given context as to what he did that was so heroic. However, I did add a little more detail about the scene and exchange between other characters regarding Keioidian. Let me know if that's sufficient. Dentface (talk) 13:50, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
- Body is now above 165 words and thus needs sectioning. UberSoldat93
(talk) 13:55, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
- Body is now above 165 words and thus needs sectioning. UberSoldat93
- The short story opens with Amden vor Keioidian already being wounded, and we aren't given context as to what he did that was so heroic. However, I did add a little more detail about the scene and exchange between other characters regarding Keioidian. Let me know if that's sufficient. Dentface (talk) 13:50, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
