- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Alliance to Restore the Republic communications center (Thyferra)
- Nominated by: —TK-999
(Rise of the Empire) 17:45, July 3, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments: A small structure with a long name.
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Here in New Hampshire, we have "Newhampshirehelpwanted.com: Long name, amazing results." Their commercials annoy me, but it's all I could think about when I saw the comment. :P—Axinal Convocation Chamber 21:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 22:20, July 3, 2011 (UTC) - Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:17, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
Menkooroo 14:14, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
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- Lee attacks
Is it really said that it was built by the Imperials? I think it was mentioned, but I'm not sure.- The text entry you get by hovering your mouse over it says "Abandoned Empire Comm Array".—TK-999 (Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- The text entry you get by hovering your mouse over it says "Abandoned Empire Comm Array".—TK-999
Please give more context about your last sentence in the Bts. That means explain how it depends on the perfomance on the player.- Done.—TK-999 (Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Done.—TK-999
- Otherwise nice work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:57, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review!—TK-999 (Rise of the Empire) 20:06, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review!—TK-999
One really tiny thing --- can you give an idea of the timeframe earlier in the article? Something like, "was constructed before 0 BBY..." ? I think it'd be fine as it is without the gamemechanics template, but I'd like to see a date given in the "definitely canon" part of the article.Menkooroo 13:22, July 12, 2011 (UTC)- Unfortunately, we don't know the age of the array. It might have been constructed during the Imperial period or whatever and abandoned later. We only know that it was first sighted around 0 BBY.TK999—[Discuss] 13:24, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Something like "constructed before 0 BBY" or "before the Assault on Thyferra, which occurred in 0 BBY" would do the trick. There's definitely something that can be definitively said about the timeline. Menkooroo 13:44, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Good idea. Added, and thanks for the review!TK999—[Discuss] 13:57, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good. And crap, sorry, one more thing: If only the outcome—and not the existence of the invasion—depends on the player's choices, then should everything up to "led by a field commander" be before the game mechanics template? Menkooroo 14:06, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Good idea. Added, and thanks for the review!TK999—[Discuss] 13:57, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Something like "constructed before 0 BBY" or "before the Assault on Thyferra, which occurred in 0 BBY" would do the trick. There's definitely something that can be definitively said about the timeline. Menkooroo 13:44, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, we don't know the age of the array. It might have been constructed during the Imperial period or whatever and abandoned later. We only know that it was first sighted around 0 BBY.TK999—[Discuss] 13:24, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
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