Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Albus Marinith

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Albus Marinith

• Nominated by: Tomotron (talk) 08:05, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Zed42 (talk) 12:12, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:36, February 5, 2020 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 04:04, February 7, 2020 (UTC)
4. Glad these articles are getting brought up to status!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:05, February 7, 2020 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 00:24, February 9, 2020 (UTC)
6. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:24, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• "Marinith was described…" By whom? If the source describes Marinith as such, it should just be stated outright. Zed42 (talk) 11:34, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Cut the "described" bit out. Source doesn't specify who described him that way. Tomotron (talk) 11:41, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
• I think "Galactic Empire" should be named in full upon its first mention, rather than linking it to "Imperial." Zed42 (talk) 11:56, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Tomotron (talk) 12:01, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
• One more thing: Could you specify that the Chimaera is an Imperial Star Destroyer for a bit more context? Zed42 (talk) 12:05, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. Tomotron (talk) 12:10, February 4, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:24, February 10, 2020 (UTC)