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Abregado-san
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Cade, Winterz is winning this contest! 501st dogma(talk) 11:44, October 6, 2012 (UTC)- Cade Calrayn
23:13, November 29, 2012 (UTC)
- Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:35, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
Provided Exiledjedi's objections are taken care of.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 01:37, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 05:16, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
Object
- Exiled Jedi
Could you provide approximate dates for when the planet fell inside each government? Please address this objection on the other Abregado nominations as well.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 00:39, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.
- "fell within the territories of several galactic powers, including the Galactic Republic sometime between 20,000 and 17,000 BBY." This makes it sound like it was only in Republic space at some point during this timeframe. Please correct this on all of the Abregado articles.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 19:48, December 6, 2012 (UTC)
- Corrected.
- "fell within the territories of several galactic powers, including the Galactic Republic sometime between 20,000 and 17,000 BBY." This makes it sound like it was only in Republic space at some point during this timeframe. Please correct this on all of the Abregado articles.--Exiled Jedi
- Done.
Also, in each Abregado article, you source the coordinates in the body to Coruscant and the Core Worlds. Shouln't this be sourced to the Atlas?--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 00:41, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
The wording seems almost identical for the part of the articles dealing with its history. Could you try and vary the wording up a little bit?--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 19:51, December 6, 2012 (UTC)
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