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Abraxin Brandy
- Nominated by: OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 22:41, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Jedi Knights spending taxpayer money on getting drunk with a Lord of the Sith.
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Support
- DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:52, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
- Great work as usual. TK-462 (talk) 18:10, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
ImpacticForce (Talk) 20:25, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 10:35, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:45, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
Object
TK
Abraxin is an Outer Rim planet, this should be noted in the body.TK-462 (talk) 23:21, 25 December 2020 (UTC)- Done. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 16:51, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
Ayrehead
What exactly establishes Part One of Plagueis as having occurred between those years? If the book itself gives those dates then you don't need a separate ref, otherwise you need to mention the other sources used to work them out. You'll also need to change "including" here as mention in your other nom.Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:17, 6 January 2021 (UTC)- It's the book itself so I've removed the reference note. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 11:40, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
- Just to check, the book gives them in BBY format? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:48, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
- Not exactly, the book says "67–65 Years Before the Battle of Yavin." Would it be alright? - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 11:54, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
- In that case I'd still write a date note. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:51, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
- Done. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 12:05, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
- In that case I'd still write a date note. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:51, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
- Not exactly, the book says "67–65 Years Before the Battle of Yavin." Would it be alright? - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 11:54, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
- Just to check, the book gives them in BBY format? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:48, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
- It's the book itself so I've removed the reference note. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 11:40, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- While not an objection, I'm going to suggest moving "Unidentified beer" to "Abraxin beer" since using "Unidentified" in the title of a food article, in my opinion, is illogical. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:16, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
- Makes sense. Done. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 21:38, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
- Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:11, 19 January 2021 (UTC)