Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/A-4P0

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A-4P0

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 04:05, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More.... more....

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 22:33, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Winterz (talk) 17:54, September 29, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 00:56, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Tinwe(comlink) 10:25, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Menkooroo (talk) 12:13, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. 501
    • Could you add that he has black sensors and is masculine programmed in the body? 501st dogma(talk) 11:51, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Winterz
    • You should improve the BtS section, including some more context on SWTOR. Winterz (talk) 00:54, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Exiled Jedi
    • Please reword the second sentence, it is rather confusing.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:51, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Hey-ho
    • Only "in 3,643 BBY" should be reffed to ref [2], not all of the prose preceding it.
      • Done.
    • Is there a pipelink you could use for "sensors?" Maybe photoreceptor?
      • Done.
    • A bitta context is needed on the Forge. Menkooroo (talk) 03:41, October 14, 2012 (UTC)
    • One more, about the date ref: I think that everything that isn't linked in the main article (or, alternatively, everything that can be linked) should be linked here, including week, year, and SIS. Some context on the SIS is needed too (spelling it out rather than abbreviating it would do it), and an explicit mention of TOR is needed for the references to the Jedi Knight class and Act I to make sense. Menkooroo (talk) 13:49, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

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