Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/224th

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224th

  • Nominated by: NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 02:33, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 222 words. I'd like it to go to GA if anyone has an idea on what I could add.

(2 GCs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Imperialles 07:09, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Thefourdotelipsis 09:04, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
  3. --TK-299 (Click Here) Imperial Emblem 12:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JangFett (Talk) 04:20, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Fett
    • Seeing a couple of sourcing issues. Make sure you source "around 22 BBY" and "Rise of the Empire" to the TCW novel.As for Echo and Hevy's clone numbers, they weren't mentioned in the episode, but rather introduced in the TCW Ultimate Battles visual guide. You can pipe link to show their nicknames only, however.
      • The numbers themselves don't have to be sourced, the person is the same and we use the numbers if we have them per precedent. As for the "Around 22 BBY" and such, sourced. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:27, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
        • I suggest that you pipe link their articles to their nicknames then. It would be more accurate, since you don't want to source them. There clone numbers weren't mentioned in the episode.
          • There's no reason to source their numbers, that's their official name. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 15:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
            • They weren't mentioned in the episode, however. You currently have them sourced to it. Please either pipelink to their nicknames, or properly source it. JangFett (Talk) 23:54, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
              • Honestly, that's dumb. It's been done on the other articles though, so I fold. --Naru
    • In the intro, what do you mean "that included Mud-Jumpers"? The 224th? the Grand Army of the Republic? That line seems out of place, as it doesn't have the necessary context. Perhaps you can create a new sentence explaining who they are.
    • "The shout-out, dedicating the following song to the group, was heard by their fellow clone troopers" Whose "fellow" clone troopers?
      • Addressed. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:27, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
        • Now it sounds like Fives, Echo, Hevy, Cutup, and other clones listed were part of the 224th. Please fix this.
    • Do we know for sure that patrolling the listening post was the rookie troops first assignment?
      • I believe they said that in the episode but I removed it. That didn't have to be mentioned. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:27, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
    • Other than that, the bts could use some shaping up. You can take a look at other TCW-related articles to see what's usually done. JangFett (Talk) 03:18, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
      • How's this? NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:27, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
        • Better, but do you need to mention the sentence about the comic book mentioning the battle? In the comic itself, it doesn't mention anything about the 224th. JangFett (Talk) 03:00, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
          • I think so, since it is such a narrow, mostly unexplored event, it's noteworthy that the battle was metioned in another source. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 15:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
  2. L'Imperialles
    • Intro: "fighting to defend the Republic" Do we know that they were defending the planet, not attacking it? If not, best drop that line.
    • BTS: "It was in that issue that the 44th was introduced to Star Wars continuity." How is the 44th relevant to this BTS?
    --Imperialles 07:14, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

  • It seemed one of your Notes and references was broken, so I feekstit. :D TK-299 (Click Here) Imperial Emblem 10:57, June 2, 2010 (UTC)