Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/108th

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

108th

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:03, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: To have it accompany the 85th.

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 17:33, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Ben

• I think it would be better to say that the unit operated during the Galactic Civil War and put the 4 ABY bit for the Gordian Reach sentence. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 16:22, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Reworded--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:33, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Intro sentence reads really weird, please reword. "Galactic Empire's military" should work just fine.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:17, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
• "...she was building an area of operations in the Pandem Nai system, rather than her own empire, and subsequently finished the conversation." Context for "her own empire" and how she finished the convo would be helpful here. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:18, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done, but the article is over the 250 word limit so I will be nominating it for a GA.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:17, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• I would like this nomination removed so that I can nominate it as a GA. Thank you--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:33, May 18, 2020 (UTC)